For someone very special...
but yes... as they say "Better Late than Never" and the moment came when I met her after a very long time...
"Aisi nazar se dekha us zalim ne chak par
Hum ne Kaleja rakh diya chaku ki nok par"
Long distance relationships are so tough to live by... and we are into this for years... as I've always believed that if a relationship can tackle time and distance its worth going for...
Sometimes when things don't move your way its so frustrating... and so is the wait and watch game... which is going in my life since long...
Would like to share one of my compositions... again sorry for my Non-Hindi blog pals...
Mohabatt ki dastan kal bhi wahi thi
Mohabatt ki dastan aaj bhi wahi hn
Ki zamane ne badalne ki koshish bahut
Par aaj bhi is rah par har galat sahi hn
Mohabatt ka dushman kal tha zamana
Mohabatt ka dushman aaj hn zamana
Parawah kahan ki zamane ki in afsaano ne
Shayad isi baat se aitraaz karta hn zamana
Mohabatt mey kurbaani kal bhi di thi
Mohabatt mey kurbaani aaj bhi di hain
Kurbaaniyo se kahan dara hn parwana
Mohabatt aur bagawat ko to daman hn purana
Mujhse kehte hn tumko bhula de
Apni aah mey nahin tumhe panah de
Aankon mey basi ho ashr mey baha de
Dil mey dhadkti ho dhadkan to ruka de
Zamane se kya kahun..
Mohabaatt soch kar nahin ki jaati hn
Ye kambakht na jaane
Kab kahan kaise ho jaati hn
Soch kar ki jaati to mohabatt kahan kehlati
Soch kar ki jaati to dil main kahan samati
Aapko kya samjhau meri bhi samajh ke bahar hn
Dil ki dhadkan mey woh hn
Aur is dhadkte dil ko ussey pyaar hn
- Puneet
(All Copyrights reserved :-)>)
I might have a busy time with audit around... wishing you all an awesome week ahead...
48 Comments:
p0000000 missed yaaaaa cho cho muchh
hugssssssssssssssss
n yessss mez 1st again
@ strawy
hey baby...
congrats again
howz u doing
huggzzzzzzzzz
believe me,distance actually brings more fragrance to the r'ship.thr's no time fr petty fortunes,nit-picking.
but its also a delicate balance to be maintained....tough but endurable..
Hi<
Back after a long time....but ws stuck by the beauty of ur wrds..kitnay khoobseret lufzoon say sajaya fasana dil ka..
abt long distance relation ships..yeah they are so hard 2 maintain..u do need tht person,,infront of u..in times of pain or happiness who is there 2 hold ur hand..and make u feel his/her presence..but if u have crossed the realm of physical existance..and still menage to connect 2 each other..i must congratulate u ..
Mujhse kehte hn tumko bhula de
Apni aah mey nahin tumhe panah de
Aankon mey basi ho ashr mey baha de
Dil mey dhadkti ho dhadkan to ruka de...
(these lines were just 2 beautiful).
Sulagty hui hayaat ,main baarish kahin nahi..
wehshtoon ki faseel main, naveed e khushboo kahin nahi..
iss zaman o makaan ki wusatoon main pinhaann..
umeed e visal kahin nahi:)
(gt soo intrigued ..by ur poetry ..started doing sm extempre ammateur poetry of mine)
tc
wha janab bahut durust farmaan kiya aapne...aaj bhi sahi ghalat sabhi hain :)
amazingly said and conveyed...daad hee daad kabool karein...kuch aur gustakhiyaan..isi tarah...phir ho jaayein...isi umeed per...
adaab arz hai ;)
'woh dur rahein ya paas rahein..nazaron mein samaaye rehate hein ...' heheeh some oldy goldies...
cheers!
aloha
okay reading your post makes me wish i could write urdu poetry. poetry sounds just much more gorgeous in the home tongue.
angrezi bongii
hah
hmmmphhhh
Puneet it would be good if u can tell us who this person is...:)
And it would be even better if u could translate atleast the main message of this song/poem...cos we do feel left out not knowing Hindi :(
Long-distance r'ships r hard to maintain...but given there's real affection and faith in each other, anything can survive over distance and time...
Keshi.
though i dont undestand the poem..i bet its something special..
huggssss
=am000nie=
Distance can never seperate hearts that truly love each other.
I had written about one here:
http://starsandsun.blogspot.com/2005/11/long-distance-lovers.html
Do read it, if you get a chance:)
Nice poem, BTW
awwwww p000,so sweet post,
so howz she , ahem ahem
n wat all u did ,,, winkzz ..
may u both get life lasting happiness re..
hugssss p000
when r u writting post on
ur e-gfs , me n keshu waiting ..'
lolzzzz...
kajrare kajrae,
mere kaare kaare naina
st000nie
hehehehe...
:)
good godd...sahi ja rahey ho tum:)
atlast i got time to blog!
kattieeee......kattieeee.....mez not going to converse with u.............
what's all that poem...........first translate them otherwise i will post every comment in nepali.........lol
post is awesome......perfect dedication to your GF...........
oh i forget mez angry with u ni........so me stopping to write
dherai dherai samjhana
byeeeeeeeeeee
ooo...beautifully written it all came frm da heart dinnit?
Long distance relationship sucks...
Ask me about it...it sucks long time :(
I've always believed that if a relationship can tackle time and distance its worth going for...
And hats off to you...the way you are handling it...and wish you guys have a nice time for years and years to come ahead.
Mohabatt mey kurbaani kal bhi di thi
Mohabatt mey kurbaani aaj bhi di hain
Kurbaaniyo se kahan dara hn parwana
Mohabatt aur bagawat ko to daman hn purana
waaah...waahhhh
Mohabbat aur bagawat ka toh daman hai purana...
Kya khoob kahi!!!
If the relationship is true, than it sustains..
If it is timepass then it sucks..
Bieng mentally together is something very important for a relationship to sustain..
Sometimes bieng under single roof
Physically close, mentally aloof, then the relation can be disaster.
So I can only say, distance cannot break or make the relation.
Anyway congrats Poooo.
whoaaa we got a shayar here... kya baat hain... waah waah...
Awwwwwwwwww wowwwww!!
That's great ... i was hoping to see u'd write her as to wht all u both did when u met! ;) ;)
haha kidding!
long distance relationships ... are... umm...yeah ... good and bad both ... but believe me ... they can actually be fun!!
and the poetry was superb!!
@ K Kavitha Reddy
thanks dear...
agree with u
thr's no time fr petty fortunes,nit-picking
ye thats left fr post marriage ;-)
lolzzz
tough but endurable..
well said
take care
Cheers
@ Sebia
Hiii Welcome back…
kitnay khoobseret lufzoon say sajaya fasana dil ka..
is tareef ka tahe dil se shukriya
well pointed out… sometimes when we need that hand to hold n shoulder to cry we don’t find it… thatz the most toughest part…
thanks so much
hey thanks for sharing that poetry… its so sweet of u…
your urdu writing is too awesome yaar…
I dun know that much of urdu… I’ll need some help to get the exact meaning
thanks again
take care
Cheers
@ Dawn
Thanks so much dear…
daad hee daad kabool karein...kuch aur gustakhiyaan..isi tarah...phir ho jaayein...isi umeed per...
aap ki har daad dil khol kar kabool karte hain :-)
aur gustakhiyoon ka silsila to chalta rahega
bus aapko na umeed karne ki gustakhi na hogi
isi bahane dil ko bahek ne ka mauka milta rahega
'woh dur rahein ya paas rahein..nazaron mein samaaye rehate hein
bilkul sahin…
so sweet of u dear
take care
cheers
@ Sadaf
poetry sounds just much more gorgeous in the home tongue
ye so true...
do u know Hindi/Urdu???
its not difficult to write a poetry...
just pen down ur thoughts n u will not realise when ur simple words becomes a poetry ... its as simple as falling in love ;-)
tk care
Cheers
@ Dream girl
hey dear
thanks for dropping by and checkin for the new post...
was travelling hence the delay...
waitng for ur comments
take care
cheers
@ Keshi
hey dear
I would have given an awesome reply had u known hindi…
Just wait dear and I’ll surely disclose the identity…
And it would be even better if u could translate atleast the main message of this song/poem...cos we do feel left out not knowing Hindi :(
am so so sorry for that dear…
I would translate the main message for u … it’s a promise…
and I’ll do that today itself in the comments section
but given there's real affection and faith in each other, anything can survive over distance and time...
that’s so true dear… that’s the test I put most of my close relationships in ;-)
hehehhee
take care
Cheers
@ Amutha
hey thanks for checking...
its very special..
n as promised to Keshi.. I'll explain the main message of the poem for my non-hindi blog pals
thanks dear
Cheers
@ rays of sun
hiii
thanks so much for appreciating...
ye I read your post and posted my comment also...
its too sweet... n gave me the idea for another post ;-)
thanks again
Keep coming
Cheers
@ Suhaag
yaar tum to eid ka chand ho..
gayab hi ho jaati ho…
lolzzzz
thanks so much for dropping…
I liked those words a lot… simply beautiful
Thanks so much for sharing…
I really like the way u share sher on my blog…
Keep coming
Take care
Cheers
@ Kiran
Hiiii
yes mez back :-)
both of u r so lucky to have each other...touch wood!!!
ye touch wood... already bahut nazar lag ti hain ;-)
thanks so much for appreciating the poem
so hows "she"...my cutiepie friend...
(i hate to address her this way ..but u tell me kya bolu ???)
shez fine... except for the fact that she misses me badly ;-)
lolzzz
Y u need to address her unless necessary ;-)
well let me tell u even im fiddaaaaa on her eyes n her long hair ....
she had recently cut her hairs...
n trust me she is looking all the more gorgeous :-)>
if i was a guy , i wud 've tried to patao her ...
;-)))
i can only say hard luck...
a lot of guyz tried their luck but only faced a denial... ur result wouldnt have been different...
but im so happy for the fact that u 2 were always there for me whne i needed u the most
thanks sis...
thats wat friends are for...
isnt it ;-)
n now u tell me ...what did u get for me ???;-
sweets ofcourse...
bt knowing me... if u wont visit my home jaldi... hardly anything will be left ;-)
take care n thanks so much
Cheers
@ Strawy
hi baby
hwz u doing
thankz so much sweeti...
so howz she , ahem ahem
n wat all u did ,,, winkzz ..
shez fine... n what all we did...
lolzzz
raaz ki baat agar samjho to raaz ko raaz rehne do ;-)
hahahahhaa
may u both get life lasting happiness re..
hugssss p000
Ameen
aawwww.... huggzzz dear...
thanks a million for that
I need blessings :-)>
when r u writting post on
ur e-gfs , me n keshu waiting
lollzzzzzzz hahahahhaha
will attempt one day :-)
thanks baby
huggzzzzz
@ Unaiza Nasim
Hi
Welcome after a long time
thank u...
n take out some time for blogging
take care
Cheers
WTF Puneet Im still waiting for the meaning..and it's still 'Today' though it will be over soon and 'Tomorrow' will dawn..:)
Wuttt u will reveal the identity too? duhhh I know it's me!
(keshi rolls her eyes..)LOL!
Keshi.
@ Nitika
Hi dear...
no kattiieeee plsssss
I'll surely translate the poetry for you... I have promised Keshi n I promise u the same :-)
post is awesome......perfect dedication to your GF...........
thanks so much dear...
dherai dherai samjhana
lollzzz so sweet
surely ;-)
take care
Cheers
@ Mί¢ђεĻLē
hiiiiii
thanks dear
Yess it came from the heart
:-))))
take care
cheers
@ arz000n
Hiiiiii
Long distance relationship sucks...
Ask me about it...it sucks long time :(
Aawwww dude… that’s sad to hear
Sometimes no option in life na
wish you guys have a nice time for years and years to come ahead
thanks a ton for that…
I need a lot of them :-)>
Thanks so much for your appreciation…
Take care
Cheers
@ BnB
Hiii dear
Good to see u back
If the relationship is true, than it sustains..
If it is timepass then it sucks..
that’s so true… but I also do believe in destiny…
Sometimes bieng under single roof
Physically close, mentally aloof, then the relation can be disaster.
very well said…
thanks so much dear
take care
cheers
@ musings (m000nie)
Hiii
thanks so much...
Main shayar to nahin... magar woh haseena... jabse dekha maine usko mujhko shayari aagayi
lolllzzz
take care
cheers
@ Cheesy
hiiii baby
That's great ... i was hoping to see u'd write her as to wht all u both did when u met! ;) ;)
lollzzzz
u n strawy wanna know the same thing...
par hathi ke haath khane ke aur aur dikhane ke aur hote hain ;-)
the poetry was superb!!
thanks so much dear
long distance relationship can be fun... ye n I'm having fun for years then ;-)
lolzzzz
take care
Cheers
@ keshi
hiii dear...
hold on... hold on...
just stealing time out of work for u ;-)
it's still 'Today' though it will be over soon and 'Tomorrow' will dawn..:)
lollzzzz hahahhaha too cool
Wuttt u will reveal the identity too? duhhh I know it's me!
(keshi rolls her eyes..)LOL!
ROFL
so sweet...
u must read strawy's comment...
i think i should implement that :-)
my next comment will have the explanation... n like a gentlemen I'm keepn my promise :-)
take care
Cheers
@ Keshi
@ Nitika
@ Amutha
I just made an attempt to convey the meaning of the poem for you
The first part of the poem says about the long-lived difference of opinion between the society and the lovers… the scene is yet the same today…society is the biggest enemy for lovers… but everything is correct in love… lovers care a damn for the society and are not afraid of sacrifice n rebelling against the society…
The second part of the poem relates to my life…where I convey that… this so called society/world is asking me to forget her and to remove her thought from my mind and my heart… I revert back to the world saying… that we don’t think and fall in love… it just happens… anywhere any time… that’s why its called love and that’s why it comes from heart… I conclude by saying… what should I try to convince people, its even beyond my understanding… I just know that my every heartbeat has her and this heart madly loves her :-)
Gosh… I hope it makes some sense to you guyz now…
This is the best I could have done…
I welcome your opinion :-)
Cheers
wooowww!!!!that's just awesome.......
thanks and hugzzzzzzzzz to u poonieee
now no kattieee........lol
we don’t think and fall in love… it just happens… anywhere any time… that’s why its called love and that’s why it comes from heart
wowohooo!!!.....i was just willing to ask u "why u plp fall in such love... i mean how"........i know its silly query..........
but then i got the answer.....it just happen ni!
scene is yet the same today…society is the biggest enemy for lovers
yeah......thats why me too scare to fall in love....i just not let it to happen..........lol.....:kidding:
I just know that my every heartbeat has her and this heart madly loves her
this is just lovely to the power million times........
superb poem!!!!!
take care
goodnight dear
**when r u writting post on
ur e-gfs , me n keshu waiting ..
lol awww st000nie, Pu is a mean guy...he wont dedicate a single word to us - cos he's scared that if he did that, we will mar his wedding lol!
Keshi.
awwww Pu thanks for that! Lemme see now...
~~Keshi wears her sexy glasses...
(na I dun wear glasses in real..lol!)
**The first part of the poem says about the long-lived difference of opinion between the society and the lovers… the scene is yet the same today…society is the biggest enemy for lovers…
very true...so to hell with the society na? :) Its simple.
**but everything is correct in love…
Thats right...Love is not perfect but that itself is what's right abt Love. Just like ppl r not perfect, Love isnt either..but Love never fails.
**Love...it just happens… anywhere any time… that’s why its called love and that’s why it comes from heart…
yes...when u think and feel from the heart, nothing can stop u...
**I just know that my every heartbeat has her and this heart madly loves her :-)
wow Im proud of u Pu...U should always stick by her....many guys run away from their Love cos they r afraid of their families/society etc. But few good men know what real Love is and I think u r one of those rare swt hrts - Im sure ur girl is in safe hands...
btw tell me if the society annoys u again..I can come in my Charlies' angel shoes and kick em off lol!
Huggggggggggz!
Keshi.
Sighhhhhhhhhhh! And all the while I was thinking it's for me or st000nie....duhhh wake up silly dreamy queen Keshi!
copyrights=right to copy?
@ DreamGirl
hii
THe poem is so simple yet so meaningful.Tussi great ho!!! :-)
thank u hain ji :-)>
btw why u need the eng version???
I hope ur gf reads ur blog...
I hope not… she will be worried considering the amount of flirting, which happens here ;-)
It feels sooo great to have someone write such lovly thngs abt us!!!
she is the only one who has read all my poems…
All the best to both of U nd ur Love...
thanks a ton for that…
I need a lot of it
Thanks so much
Take care
Cheers
@ Kiran
hiiii
mere liye 1 pc of sweet to bacha ke rakhna...
surely... provided u dont make it too late
thanks for quoting that sher...
its sweet... but I have read that earlier too...
thanks sis
take care
Cheers
@ Nitika
hiii dear
now no kattieee.......
yeee huggzzzzzzzz
thats why me too scare to fall in love....i just not let it to happen
lollzzzzz
most of the time u will realise much after u actually fall in love... it will happen wen it has to... all the best
:-))
thanks so much for all the appreciation...
take care
Cheers
@ arun tatikonda
Would appreciate if you will stop cheap publicity of ur blog
Thanks
@ Hagrid
hiii dude
wish u tons of luc..
thankkkkkssss so very much for that...
i need a hell lot of them ;-)
take care
Cheers
@ Keshi
hiii babezzz
he wont dedicate a single word to us - cos he's scared that if he did that, we will mar his wedding lol!
aawwwwwwwwww thats so mean...
u girlzz are amongst my best pals... will surely dedicate a post...
n not worried of ur march ;-)
cheers
@ Keshi
na I dun wear glasses in real
lolllzzzzz .... wat was that clari for ;-)
so to hell with the society na? :) Its simple.
yes yes... its indeed is very simple ;-)
U should always stick by her....many guys run away from their Love cos they r afraid of their families/society etc
surely dear... no second thought abt that...
I believe in my dreamz n I strongly chase them...
and with sweet friends like you am sure I shouldn worry abt anyone...
..I can come in my Charlies' angel shoes and kick em off
lollzzzz
I'll need ur help in that case :-))
And all the while I was thinking it's for me or st000nie....duhhh wake up silly dreamy queen
aawwwwwwwwww
u girlz hold a very special place in my hr8... wont disappoint ur dreamz ;-)
huggzzzz
kaun hai ye Miss Bhagyashali
jispe likhi tumne kavita matwali :)
"Aisi nazar se dekha us zalim ne chak par
Hum ne Kaleja rakh diya chaku ki nok par"
Kajra re...kajra re...
Oye Hoye...i love the post!
Pu bear :)
**u girlzz are amongst my best pals
ok dedicate a whole blog for us then...lol!
**I believe in my dreamz n I strongly chase them...
I can see Pu running down the streeet chasing something..ooops it's a girl :):)
aww man, ur girl is lucky...good on ya always!
Keshi.
@ Tarun
copyrights=right to copy?
exactly...
thats y its written copyrights reserved ;-)
Welcome to Puneetz world
take care
Cheers
@ Dreamgirl
hiii
I am sure she knows how flirtatious u are
yes... she knows me in n out...
thanks so much
take care
Cheers
@ Zombie
hi dear
diabetic with so much sweetness
lollzzzz
thank u so much for ur wishes
where are u btw???
take care
cheers
@ Manish
thanks so much buddy
par naam lunga to badnaam ho jayegi ;-)
lolzzz
take care
cheers
@ Pallavi
hiii dear
Oye Hoye...i love the post!
My Pleasure entirely
thanks dear
Cheers
@ Keshi
hiii baby
Pu bear
lolzzz so sweet
ok dedicate a whole blog for us then...lol!
this y I say about girlz...
u give them a hand and they will sit on ur head ;-)
lolzzzz
can see Pu running down the streeet chasing
lolzzz running down
I've my sweetheart bike na ;-)
thanks keshu pie
Cheers
**u give them a hand and they will sit on ur head
wut u gave me ur hand? when????
lol!
Keshi.
@ Keshi
wut u gave me ur hand? when????
I know na u will sit on my head so I never gave ;-) lollzzz
Cheers
@ Divya
Heyyy dear
Welcome back...
Thanks so so much....
huggzzz
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