Friday, February 10, 2006

A story...

One day on my way to home a fare nearby diverted my attention … it reminded me of my child hood… and then random thoughts started hitting my mind and my foot walked inside the fare…

The sight inside looked a lot familiar, infact since all these years a lot of things were changed… but certain things were still the same… like the Robot telling future… every time he will tell a different story about your future;-)… that Giant Wheel… Cards game… Water rides for Kids… popcorn and ice cream vendors trying to tempt the kids

Some things really caught my surprise… like a stall selling books on sex… blowjob… Kamasutra… sources for blue books and blue movies were no more hidden… they always carried the charismatic power to attract the youngsters…

Inspite of the crowd and noise, my heart felt the loneliness… was he searching for my childhood… in all these years the innocence was lost… can’t even say that grapes are sour because I had my share…

Chaotic thoughts kept running in my mind…memories were flashing…and my feet were back on the road that was leading to my home.
Yes this is only a story... I was tagged to tell one by Educatedunemployed :-))
Thanks to her for the tag...
The rules were:
(1) write a 100-to-200-word entry using the following words:
I, me, blow job, grapes, random, power, loneliness, water, robot and blue;
(2) use these words once and only once; and of course
(3) the entry should make sense.

My story had 191 Words… hope it made sense… that was tough… but loved it :-)>)
I'm not specifically tagging anyone... whoever feels like can take it.

31 Comments:

Blogger strawy said...

rubs her sleepy eyes ...
hope ki ye p00 ka blog hi hai ...
grrrrrrrr p000
ME 1st :D
n hits her bed again
oopsss m i dreaming of beig 1st or this is real ...
lolzzzzz
hugss p00

11:02 PM, February 10, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

lolz doll
sote sote yehan par aagayi...
rt place... its puneetdreamz after all ;-)

u first soniyee
huggzzzzz

11:12 PM, February 10, 2006  
Blogger Shantanu said...

Hey puneet... nice blog...the nuclear family one was really cool
-Shantanu

2:15 AM, February 11, 2006  
Blogger R said...

not bad! this tag has been on almost every blog lately!

2:30 AM, February 11, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ shantanu
Hii welcome to my Blog :-))
thanks for the appreciation :-))

Keep coming
Cheers :-))

@ rohit
LOL i know...
:-))

Cheers

4:14 AM, February 11, 2006  
Blogger Urvashi said...

Hey! That was quite nice. And the story did make sense. I think I'll take up this tag sometime.

6:36 AM, February 11, 2006  
Blogger Kathy said...

Oh tag again??..good ur not tagging anyone ^_^ so u did checked it naa?? hehe..yup the one ive told u last night..?ur message made me smile^_^ thanx yaar...

-kathy-

9:09 AM, February 11, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice job puneet.

9:12 AM, February 11, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

ye kya story thi??? mujhe laga ki mein kisi galat blog par aa gayi hoon.. It was actually very bad.. LOL.. dun worry, keep trying one day will write a good story.. :) but its good u tried.. :)

5:28 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger MS said...

Hi Dreamer!!

Hmmm...so now U've also turned into a gr8 story-writer after being the king of dreamz!! :)

Good one that!!

Cheers!!
MS

6:34 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger Łóòň Ġãĺ said...

hey wow!!!

u've written it so so so well .... damn mine was such a timepass!!!

great job eh ... am impressed the way u've used to words .... great!

7:11 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger che sara sara said...

u r smart..SK..!!

7:45 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ gangadhar
thanks dude :-)
Cheers


@ phoenix rises
hiii
thanks dear...
looking forward to c one @ ur blog :-)
Cheers


@ kiran
oye wat was ganda in that...
can u tell me...

u need to read the entire post for that matter :-)
Cheers


@ lil_kanth
LOL
ye not tagging coz some people don't enjoy :-)
ye i checkd n liked those :-)
smilezzz

7:54 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ nagraj
thanks dude :-)>

@ jigal
thank u buddy :-)
cheers


@ doll
:-) u r on the rt blog :-)
will try to make a better attempt next time :-)
thanks
Cheers


@ zombie
more than my feet my mind was tired
thinking ;-)
LOlz


@ ms
hey good to see u
thanks for the appreciation :-))
Cheers

8:02 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ cheesy
hi dear
thanks so much :-)
i liked urs ;-) it was damn funny :-))


thanks again :-)
Cheers


@ sophia
thanks dear :-)
accepted

Cheers

8:09 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger Sasi a.k.a Saz said...

What the hell...this is a tag.. so all the words must align ..as in follow in sequence ??


blured mongoose i am :s

8:41 AM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger Emotions said...

Nice scribbling Puneet......

all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)

9:17 PM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ Sasi a.k.a Saz
LOL
ye it was just a tag...
not in the same order bt all the words shld appear only once in the story :-))

Cheers


@ emotions
thanks dear
:-)
wanna try it :-))
When u were on my blog I was on urs :-))

Cheers

9:22 PM, February 12, 2006  
Blogger Emotions said...

hey i'll surely try it n hope to be able to do it...BTW how u came to know that ven i was on ur blog u were on mine ???

12:19 AM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ neetika
thanks for the appreciation dear
:-)
take care
Cheers


@ emotions
I get the gmail alert on google chat wen a comment is made on my blog (if I'm online)...
so I was on ur blog wen u posted a comment on mine :-))

ur an excellent writer :-)
so go ahead :-)

Cheers

1:19 AM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger Ar Ar Ar Arrrrr said...

I just wonder how blue, blowjob and grapes will go in one story...damn if I sit down to take this tag, it will turn out into a nice porn movie :D

Thanks for not tagging me...else ma visitors count surely wud have drastically reduced...

Nice story dude!!

2:04 AM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger tulipspeaks said...

good plot honey..pretty neat!

=am000nie=

7:14 AM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ arz000n
LOL z000nie
already the search words which are leading to ur blog are pretty exciting...

Cheers


@ amutha
thanks dear :-))
Cheers

9:07 AM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger educatedunemployed said...

Heyyyyyyyy, Well done.Thanks for taking up the tag.
Just like to point one thing out.You have used the word blue 2 times.MUAHAHAHA..pichle janam main editor theee..
Well done..and thanks again.

12:16 PM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ educatedunemployed
hey nicely pointed out :-)
that shows u read the entire post ;-)
lemme edit it ;-)
thanks so much

is janam main bhi editor ban sakti hain ;-)

Cheers

8:33 PM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger Dawn said...

hmm no comments

10:58 PM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

No Comments :-(
Y :-(

10:59 PM, February 13, 2006  
Blogger teacup said...

hey, that was very nice!!...i don't know wat i'll make of those words...wat wid kaamsutra and blowjoj...plus I me and grapes....lol..good one...also made sense...i think i will take it up sometime:))

4:55 AM, February 14, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ yashita
thanks dear :-)
give a try... its fun...
I know its a bit tough even I took a long time to take this tag ;-)
and u have to use all those words only once ;-)
hehehe
all the best :-)

Cheers

5:16 AM, February 14, 2006  
Blogger Dawn said...

.....I dont know wht to comment there...so said wht I felt :D...
nothing to feel sad...!!!

Sometimes it happens...where one's thought is not swining in that direction ...may be ..lol

have fun
cheers

2:53 PM, February 15, 2006  
Blogger PuNeEt said...

@ dawn
no issues dear :-)>
smilesss..

Cheers

3:45 AM, February 16, 2006  

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