A story...
The sight inside looked a lot familiar, infact since all these years a lot of things were changed… but certain things were still the same… like the Robot telling future… every time he will tell a different story about your future;-)… that Giant Wheel… Cards game… Water rides for Kids… popcorn and ice cream vendors trying to tempt the kids
Some things really caught my surprise… like a stall selling books on sex… blowjob… Kamasutra… sources for blue books and blue movies were no more hidden… they always carried the charismatic power to attract the youngsters…
Inspite of the crowd and noise, my heart felt the loneliness… was he searching for my childhood… in all these years the innocence was lost… can’t even say that grapes are sour because I had my share…
Chaotic thoughts kept running in my mind…memories were flashing…and my feet were back on the road that was leading to my home.
My story had 191 Words… hope it made sense… that was tough… but loved it :-)>)
31 Comments:
rubs her sleepy eyes ...
hope ki ye p00 ka blog hi hai ...
grrrrrrrr p000
ME 1st :D
n hits her bed again
oopsss m i dreaming of beig 1st or this is real ...
lolzzzzz
hugss p00
lolz doll
sote sote yehan par aagayi...
rt place... its puneetdreamz after all ;-)
u first soniyee
huggzzzzz
Hey puneet... nice blog...the nuclear family one was really cool
-Shantanu
not bad! this tag has been on almost every blog lately!
@ shantanu
Hii welcome to my Blog :-))
thanks for the appreciation :-))
Keep coming
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@ rohit
LOL i know...
:-))
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Hey! That was quite nice. And the story did make sense. I think I'll take up this tag sometime.
Oh tag again??..good ur not tagging anyone ^_^ so u did checked it naa?? hehe..yup the one ive told u last night..?ur message made me smile^_^ thanx yaar...
-kathy-
nice job puneet.
ye kya story thi??? mujhe laga ki mein kisi galat blog par aa gayi hoon.. It was actually very bad.. LOL.. dun worry, keep trying one day will write a good story.. :) but its good u tried.. :)
Hi Dreamer!!
Hmmm...so now U've also turned into a gr8 story-writer after being the king of dreamz!! :)
Good one that!!
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MS
hey wow!!!
u've written it so so so well .... damn mine was such a timepass!!!
great job eh ... am impressed the way u've used to words .... great!
u r smart..SK..!!
@ gangadhar
thanks dude :-)
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@ phoenix rises
hiii
thanks dear...
looking forward to c one @ ur blog :-)
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@ kiran
oye wat was ganda in that...
can u tell me...
u need to read the entire post for that matter :-)
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@ lil_kanth
LOL
ye not tagging coz some people don't enjoy :-)
ye i checkd n liked those :-)
smilezzz
@ nagraj
thanks dude :-)>
@ jigal
thank u buddy :-)
cheers
@ doll
:-) u r on the rt blog :-)
will try to make a better attempt next time :-)
thanks
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@ zombie
more than my feet my mind was tired
thinking ;-)
LOlz
@ ms
hey good to see u
thanks for the appreciation :-))
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@ cheesy
hi dear
thanks so much :-)
i liked urs ;-) it was damn funny :-))
thanks again :-)
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@ sophia
thanks dear :-)
accepted
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What the hell...this is a tag.. so all the words must align ..as in follow in sequence ??
blured mongoose i am :s
Nice scribbling Puneet......
all d bst !!
keep writing n keep smiling :-)
@ Sasi a.k.a Saz
LOL
ye it was just a tag...
not in the same order bt all the words shld appear only once in the story :-))
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@ emotions
thanks dear
:-)
wanna try it :-))
When u were on my blog I was on urs :-))
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hey i'll surely try it n hope to be able to do it...BTW how u came to know that ven i was on ur blog u were on mine ???
@ neetika
thanks for the appreciation dear
:-)
take care
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@ emotions
I get the gmail alert on google chat wen a comment is made on my blog (if I'm online)...
so I was on ur blog wen u posted a comment on mine :-))
ur an excellent writer :-)
so go ahead :-)
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I just wonder how blue, blowjob and grapes will go in one story...damn if I sit down to take this tag, it will turn out into a nice porn movie :D
Thanks for not tagging me...else ma visitors count surely wud have drastically reduced...
Nice story dude!!
good plot honey..pretty neat!
=am000nie=
@ arz000n
LOL z000nie
already the search words which are leading to ur blog are pretty exciting...
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@ amutha
thanks dear :-))
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Heyyyyyyyy, Well done.Thanks for taking up the tag.
Just like to point one thing out.You have used the word blue 2 times.MUAHAHAHA..pichle janam main editor theee..
Well done..and thanks again.
@ educatedunemployed
hey nicely pointed out :-)
that shows u read the entire post ;-)
lemme edit it ;-)
thanks so much
is janam main bhi editor ban sakti hain ;-)
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hey, that was very nice!!...i don't know wat i'll make of those words...wat wid kaamsutra and blowjoj...plus I me and grapes....lol..good one...also made sense...i think i will take it up sometime:))
@ yashita
thanks dear :-)
give a try... its fun...
I know its a bit tough even I took a long time to take this tag ;-)
and u have to use all those words only once ;-)
hehehe
all the best :-)
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.....I dont know wht to comment there...so said wht I felt :D...
nothing to feel sad...!!!
Sometimes it happens...where one's thought is not swining in that direction ...may be ..lol
have fun
cheers
@ dawn
no issues dear :-)>
smilesss..
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